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Friday 26 June 2015

Quad Blogging With Room 8 Paerata School!


 Minasan, kon'nichiwa.
This is the blog post from Paerata School's Room 8's blog that I commented on. I am just waiting for my comment to be approved by their teacher and then I can show it on my blog (here!) If you click on the link below it will take you to the Room 8's blog were the comments for the blog post above will show! Click Here! This is the blog post!!

Monday 22 June 2015

Flying Rockets!!


 Barev bolorin,
 Today we had some of the Stardome team come and help us fly our, mostly, student lead rockets. McCahon class, the class I am in, won the highest flight award which the video above shows. Nisha, Simeon, Arnav and I were the makers or engineers of the rocket. We also designed it and it was so awesome having our class room mates praise us. If you would like to see the actual rocket, comment down below and I will upload some close ups! 

Tuesday 16 June 2015

Stardome! YAYY!



Bună ziua tuturor pe,
As you can see we went to Stardome! We firstly, watched a short film about Matariki.



After having a free film, we were able to go to the Making or Art room. We were able to 
make rockets out of cardboard cylinders, get face paints and make super flying paper planes!
Here is Siliuasi designing her rocket!



Johan always with a super smile!


Work Hard Girls! Your Nearly Finished!!



It's almost time to go!
We had a lot of fun while at Stardome even the bus ride to and from! 
If you have been to
Stardome, comment down below!

Sunday 14 June 2015

Simeon And I's Conversations!

Hei alle sammen,
this means hello everybody in Norwegian, this is some comments that I have been giving to Simeon in my class an we have been reply back to each other. This is just like my last post about Lyle and I having a conversation! If you have a learning device or any device, try and comment on other blogs! Comment down below for requests on anything else!

Saturday 13 June 2015

Stardome DLO


Hola a todos,

We, McCahon Class, have been learning about Space. Therefore, we had a trip to Stardome observatory! We have learnt a lot about the Maori New Year, Matariki! We were able to make our own rockets and paper planes. If you are learning about Space, flick me a comment to tell me what your school's main focus!

Thursday 4 June 2015

4/5/15 SPEEDWRITE: Shine bright like a star!





SPEED WRITE: INFORMATION REPORT ON STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.




My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading/title:


  • is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
yes

My opening paragraph/introduction:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way
yes

  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
yes

  • outlines the main features of the subject
yes

My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:


  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
yes

  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
yes

  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)
yes

  • include specific, technical vocabulary
yes

  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
yes

  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information


My end paragraph/conclusion:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points
yes

  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found


Shine bright like a star!



Intro:
As we, Humans, may not take much notice of the stars that are in the sky at night. Yet there is much more you need to know. Stars can vary in size and colour so this is where you need to be. Stars are a sphere of hot plasma. I will go on to explain, the life cycle, general information and the types of stars.



The Life Cycle:
Everything as a life cycle just like stars. Stars start out as a cloud full of gas and dust. Interesting fact is that stars are born in nebulae. Scientifically, the clumps of dust and gas collapse under gravitational forces that will form the next stage. Protostars, these stars experience further collapses and form the main sequence stars. Overtime as these stars grow older they will expand. Therefore, the core will eventually run out of hydrogen then helium. The outer layers will expand, cool and become less bright. These come into the stars of a red giant or a red super giant and will explode and collapse. This process will proceed and many star may die and form black holes. We thought stars live forever but unfortunately the unexpected has been expected.





General Info:
There are many facts about stars and generalising information is easier to understand about stars. Huge, organised collections are stars which are called clusters. These stars can live for over billions of years. Interestingly, the name star in from an ancient Greek word 'aster' meaning star. There is many stars in the night sky. There is approximately, 3,000 stars in a night sky. There is to be about 200-400 in a milking way galaxy alone. There are many things that are not commonly known about stars.





Types of Stars:
Stars vary in size and colours. If you did not know already, there is stars that are measured to be 100- 200 times bigger than the Sun. The Sun is very hot but is a very small planet. The Sun is a dwarf planet along side with a lot more. Yellow stars are medium sized which corresponds to the amount of heat provided. Approximately, medium sized stars have a medium heat. Blue giants often run out of fuel in only 10,000 to 100,000 years! These stars only live a short time meaning scientists use them to find places in outer space where new stars are forming.





[Conclusion]
Stars vary in shapes, sizes, colours and heat. My opinion of stars are very important because without them of a night of the New Moon we wouldn't be able to have natural light. If this has helped, you may be inspired to write your very own non-chronological report!








Tuesday 2 June 2015

Using Blogging To Receive Feedback!



Ciao a tutti,
this is a comment I received from Lyle in my classroom. We have been focusing on explanation writing and we wrote about the Moon! (Our main focus in topic is Earth and Beyond!) Nevertheless, I wanted to respond back because I didn't want to leave him hanging! I mean come on.


This is my comment back to Lyle! I haven't heard back but its fine, he is probably busy. If you want to have conversations or receive feedback. Make sure you comment on other peoples blog more than usual. Comment down below!