That Was Camp.
Remember when I went up the Giant's ladder really hard?
Remember when coming down was more better and I said Now am I scared of heights?
That was camp having Saunoa as a partner and our teamwork was one of our best qualities!
Remember when I went surfing and when I tried to stand, instead I got hit in the head with my board then felt a bit dazed but the wet suit kept me warm from the alike Antarctic cold water?
Remember the time where I nearly stood up with the help of Gus (the instructor!)?
That was my adventure in the ocean, surfing on the sand.
Remember how I tasted bread and butter pudding?
Do you remember how I loved it and would like to taste that again because it was really delicious?
That was camp with an amazing meal to finish off our busy days.
Bonjour Evanjaline!
ReplyDeleteI love your collage because it just hooked me in straight away! I also think that your poem is really interesting by the phrases you've picked and the language features you've used. There are some mistakes you may have not picked up so try to go back and re read your work.
Hopefully you can check out my blog post:
http://hpstomam.blogspot.co.nz/
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